Nightingale Updates Her Resume

[DerailAmnesty.com]

Originally Posted by Ayatollahgondola

Who isn't suited for it? It shows that her background is not geared to management, politics, or finance. It also shows that Chelene doesn't stick with things very long. She went from farmhand(I doubt this one really), to artist, to model, to stage, to producing(I really doubt this one), to heating and air repair.

Jean isn't suited for it. I'm sorry, was what I wrote somehow vague or otherwise imprecise?

Davi, look at what you've got if you're writing a resume/background piece intended to display Chelene favorably. What would you have done differently than the author of that piece?

[Ayatollahgondola]

Originally Posted by DerailAmnesty.com

Jean isn't suited for it. I'm sorry, was what I wrote somehow vague or otherwise imprecise?

It was unnecessary

If Chelene were running for a position on "survivor", that would be a good resume. Tendering that one for an executive position was as foolish as those who might rely on it as a basis to vote for her.

[DerailAmnesty.com]

Unnecessary, maybe. Accurate, without a doubt. Vague as to whom it referred? Not by any stretch of the imagination.

You didn't answer the question, however. You said you don't like what the author wrote. How would you change it?

[Jeanfromfillmore]

In answer to your question Sam, yes I am one of the best suited to make that observation. You just can't take the fact that I won't put up with your bullying crap. You know so little about me, yet you spew it as though you're doing my biography.

[Ayatollahgondola]

Originally Posted by DerailAmnesty.com

Unnecessary, maybe. Accurate, without a doubt. Vague as to whom it referred? Not by any stretch of the imagination.

You didn't answer the question, however. You said you don't like what the author wrote. How would you change it?

You cannot be serious....
You want me to write something for Chelena or her crew to pick up and run with? The only thing I'd offer to help her write is her confession

[DerailAmnesty.com]

Originally Posted by Ayatollahgondola

You cannot be serious....
You want me to write something for Chelena or her crew to pick up and run with? The only thing I'd offer to help her write is her confession

I don't want you to write anything. I want you to tell me how it could be improved. You said you don't like it. OK, so what could fix it?

Davi, you can't polish a turd. The author of that piece has to write about Chelene. That's the topic. That passage is not bad at all. It makes her sound All-American, family-oriented and portrays her as having a variety of experiences.

It highlights and polishes the good, and ignores or minimizes the bad.

Unfortunately, discovering the cure to cancer, possessing a towering intellect, building a financial empire or leading the life of an admirable role model aren't on the menu. That's not the author's fault, though.

[Ayatollahgondola]

Originally Posted by DerailAmnesty.com

I don't want you to write anything. I want you to tell me how it could be improved. You said you don't like it. OK, so what could fix it?

Davi, you can't polish a turd. The author of that piece has to write about Chelene. That's the topic. That passage is not bad at all. It makes her sound All-American, family-oriented and portrays her as having a variety of experiences.

It highlights and polishes the good, and ignores or minimizes the bad.

Unfortunately, discovering the cure to cancer, possessing a towering intellect, building a financial empire or leading the life of an admirable role model aren't on the menu. That's not the author's fault, though.

Highlights the good? Maybe if it were selling her to her own mother, but not to a wary populous state longing for someone who works well with others. Think about it: Our current governor is perceived as being an outcast within his own party. He also has not been able to make east meet west on just about anything under the dome. In short, he's a loner who does what he wants..or maybe what washington wants. But people around the state want a working partnership in the capitol, not another several years of paralysis. So is Chelene's resume about her ability to work well with others? that's rhetorical of course, and a little sarcastic too. That resume screams Me..Me..Me..Meeee. This piece is a terrible lie of course, but if you're going to defraud, you might at least misrepresent the product so it will sell to the customers you are marketing to.

[DerailAmnesty.com]

Y'know Davi, I don't the first thing voters are looking for is works well with others.

Nonetheless, you answered the question. We disagree.

[PochoPatriot]

Originally Posted by Ayatollahgondola

That resume screams Me..Me..Me..Meeee

And when has it never been about her?

I have heard that my American Apparel protests caused her a great deal of concern. Why? Because some one did something without her being a part of it. I wonder if MikeinLA received some of that "concern" also? He was the co-organizer of that event.